Synopsis
(female name here) receives a text from an unknown number while she is sitting with her boyfriend, they discuss it and she send a reply back asking ‘who is this?’, this is when we Meet (psycho) where he receives this text and gets angry because she doesn't know who it is, and as he stands up in anger there is a reveal that he is obsessed with her and has a shrine of her on the wall. He then looks at his phone and and goes on ‘Find my friends’ app and watches her location, puts his coat on and leaves the room. We then go back to (girls name here) and (boys name here) her boyfriend and they have a discussion, then leave and go to the pub.
On the way they have to walk through a park, in that park (psycho) is also there following her location. As they walk through the park, they see him sitting on a bench (pan to the stalker on the bench) they take no notice of the stalker sitting across from the park as they continue their walk through the park. The camera pans towards the bench again as it follows the couples gaze back towards the original bench where they first saw the psycho sitting. It becomes apparent that the stalker is missing and not sat at the bench. They continue on their journey to the pub and as the walk round a corner and we see a figure appear behind them wearing a mask to hides his identity. Then we see from the stalkers view as he hits the boyfriend over the head with a glass bottle, we hear the smash of the glass as the bottle comes into contact with the boyfriends head. The screen cuts to a black screen and we hear the girlfriend scream and panic. The stalker appears again but this time doing day to day things as to the public he seems like a regular average person as he goes to the local shops.
When he gets back from the shop he sits on the sofa, smoking and drinking beer, a distant knocking comes from the upstairs of the house; the psycho gets up and walks upstairs still wearing a mask to hide his face he bangs the cupboard and shouts. It’s clear the girl is trapped inside the cupboard. He then returns back downstairs to the room he was currently sat in and resumes his activity of watching tv and smoking. We hear the girl starting to bang back on the cupboard shouting to be let out; the stalker walks back upstairs, walks up the to the cupboard and yanks the door open and reveals himself. She is shocked as she realises she knows him and questions why he’s doing this. He explains that he did this because he wanted her and didn’t think her boyfriend was good enough for her. The female character explains that he’s her boyfriend’s friend and continually asks why he's doing this to her, the stalker remains quiet and ignores her pleading.
The girl pleads with (psycho) to let her out to go to the toilet and so takes off the handcuffs. She takes this opportunity to run to the door but he grabs her, throws her to the floor and begins to choke her asking “Why did you do that!?”. He accidentally kills her, however. He then puts the body in the boot of his car. He drives to the top of the building or by a bridge, opens the boot, looks at her and then drives off a bridge.
(female name here) receives a text from an unknown number while she is with her boyfriend at her house, they discuss it and she send a reply back asking ‘who is this?’, this is when we Meet (psycho) he is at home when he receives this text and gets angry because she doesn't know who he is. There is a reveal that he is obsessed with her and has a shrine of her on the wall. He then watches her location and follows her on 'Find My Friends' App, and leaves. We then go back to (girls name here) and (boys name here), her boyfriend and they are leaving to go to the pub.
On the way they have to walk through a park, (psycho) is also there following her location. As they walk through the park, they notice him sitting on a bench, they take no notice of the stalker as they dont realise they know who it is. Sitting across from the park as they continue their walk through the park. The couples gaze back towards the original bench where they first saw the psycho sitting. It becomes apparent that the stalker is missing and not sat at the bench. They continue on their journey to the pub and as the walk round a corner the stalker walks behind them wearing a mask. Then from the stalkers view he hits the boyfriend over the head with a glass bottle, we hear the smash of the glass as the bottle comes into contact with the boyfriends head. The screen goes blank and we hear the girlfriend scream and panic.
The stalker appears again but this time doing day to day things as to the public he seems like a regular average person as he goes to the local shops. When he gets back from the shop he sits on the sofa, smoking and drinking beer, a distant knocking comes from the upstairs of the house; the psycho gets up and walks upstairs still wearing a mask to hide his face he bangs the cupboard and shouts. It’s clear the girl is trapped inside the cupboard. He then returns back downstairs to the room he was sat in and resumes his activity of watching tv and smoking. We hear the girl starting to bang back on the cupboard shouting to be let out; the stalker walks back upstairs, walks up the to the cupboard and yanks the door open and reveals himself. She is shocked as she realises she knows him and questions why he’s doing this. He explains that he did this because he wants her and didn’t think her boyfriend was good enough for her. The female character explains that he’s her boyfriend’s friend and continually asks why he's doing this to her, the stalker remains quiet and ignores her pleading. The girl pleads with (psycho) to let her out to go to the toilet and so takes off the handcuffs. She takes this opportunity to run to the door but he grabs her, throws her to the floor and begins to choke her asking “Why did you do that!?”. He accidentally kills her,
he then panics and doesnt know what he is going to do. He then puts the body in the boot of his car. He drives to the top of the building or by a bridge, opens the boot, stares at her for a while upset gets in the car and then drives it off the bridge or building.
Kelly... receives a text from an unknown number while she is with her boyfriend, Luke, at her house, they discuss the text and she sends a reply back asking ‘who is this?’, this is when we meet Steven; he is at home when he receives this reply and gets angry and frustrated because she doesn't know who he is, he has wanted her to recognise him for so long and he feels as if she ignores his existance. There is a reveal that he is obsessed with her as he stands up and stares at a wall shrine of her. He has been madly in love with her for a few years but his friend is with her, he has had enough now. He then watches her location and follows her on 'Find My Friends' App, and leaves the room. We then go back to Kelly and Luke talking about their friends being at the pub, they then leave to go to the pub.
On the way they have to walk through a park, Steven is also there following her location. As they walk through the park, they notice someone sitting on a bench, they take no notice of the stalker but they dont realise they know who it is. Sitting across from the park as they continue their walk through the park holding hands. Steven sees that they are holding hands and gets extremely angry and wants to do something about it now. The couple gaze back towards the original bench where they first saw the psycho sitting. It becomes apparent that the stalker is missing and not sat at the bench. They continue on their journey to the pub and as the walk round a corner the stalker walks behind them wearing a mask. Then from Steven's view he hits Luke over the head with a glass bottle, we hear the smash of the glass as the bottle comes into contact with Luke head. The screen goes blank and we hear Kelly screaming and panicking.
Steven appears again but this time doing day to day things as to the public he seems like a regular average person as he goes to the local shops. When he gets back from the shop he sits on the sofa, puts the radio on, smoking and drinking beer. On the radio there is a news announcement about the violent kidnapping as soon as he hears it he turns it off. A distant knocking comes from the upstairs of the house; he gets up and walks upstairs wearing a mask to hide his face he bangs the cupboard and shouts for her to be quite. It’s clear Kelly is trapped inside the cupboard. He then returns back downstairs to the room he was sat in and resumes his activity of watching tv and smoking. We hear Kelly starting to bang back on the cupboard shouting to be let out; the stalker walks back upstairs, walks up the to the cupboard and yanks the door open and reveals his face to her. She is shocked as she realises she knows him and questions why he’s doing this. He explains that he did this because he wants her and didn’t think Luke was good enough for her. Kelly explains that Steven is Luke's Friend and continually asks why he's doing this to her, Steven remains quiet and ignores her pleading. Kelly pleads with Steven to let her out to go to the toilet and so takes off the handcuffs. She takes this opportunity to run to the door but he grabs her, throws her to the floor and begins to choke her asking “Why did you do that, why did you try and escape!?”. His deperate state of love has drawn him to accidentally kill her, he then panics and doesnt know what he is going to do. He then puts the body in the boot of his car. He drives to the top of the building or by a bridge, opens the boot, stares at Kellys corpse for a while, contemplating what he has done. Gets in the car and then drives it off the bridge or building.
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Draft 3
Kelly... receives a text from an unknown number while she is with her boyfriend, Luke, at her house, they discuss the text and she sends a reply back asking ‘who is this?’, this is when we meet the Stalker; he is at home when he receives this reply and gets angry and frustrated because she doesn't know who he is, he has wanted her to recognise him for so long and he feels as if she ignores his existance. There is a wall shrine of her in his room. He then watches her location and follows her on 'Find My Friends' App, and leaves the room. We then go back to Kelly and Luke talking about their friends being at the pub, they then leave to go to the pub.
On the way they have to walk through a park, The Stalker is also there following her location. As they walk through the park, they notice someone sitting on a bench (it is the Stalker), they take no notice as they dont realise they know who it is sitting across from the park. As they continue their walk through the park holding hands. The Stalker sees that they are holding hands and gets extremely angry and wants to do something about it now. The couple gaze back towards the original bench where they first saw the psycho sitting. It becomes apparent that the stalker is missing and not sat at the bench. They continue on their journey to the pub and as the walk round a corner the stalker walks behind them wearing a mask. Then from The Stalker's view he hits Luke over the head with a glass bottle, we hear the smash of the glass as the bottle comes into contact with Luke's head. The screen goes blank and we hear Kelly screaming and panicking.
Steven appears doing day to day things as to the public he seems like a regular average person as he goes to the local shops. When he gets back from the shop he sits on the sofa, puts the radio on, smoking and drinking beer. On the radio there is a news announcement about the violent kidnapping as soon as he hears it he turns it off. A distant knocking comes from the upstairs of the house; he gets up and walks upstairs wearing the mask the stalker was wearing to hide his face he bangs the cupboard and shouts for her to be quite. It’s clear Kelly is trapped inside the cupboard. As he turns around there is the shrine, it reveals that Steven is the stalker. He then returns back downstairs to the room he was sat in and resumes his activity of watching tv and smoking. We hear Kelly starting to bang back on the cupboard shouting to be let out; the stalker walks back upstairs, walks up the to the cupboard and yanks the door open and reveals his face to her. She is shocked as she realises she knows him and questions why he’s doing this. He explains that he did this because he wants her and didn’t think Luke was good enough for her. Kelly explains that Steven is Luke's Friend and continually asks why he's doing this to her, Steven remains quiet and ignores her pleading. Kelly pleads with Steven to let her out to go to the toilet and so takes off the handcuffs. She takes this opportunity to run to the door but he grabs her, throws her to the floor and begins to choke her asking “Why did you do that, why did you try and escape!?”. His deperate state of love has drawn him to accidentally kill her, he then panics and doesnt know what he is going to do. He then puts the body in the boot of his car. He drives to the top of the building or by a bridge, opens the boot, stares at Kellys corpse for a while, contemplating what he has done. Gets in the car and then drives it off the bridge or building.
Draft 4
Kelly... receives a text from an unknown number while she is with her boyfriend, Luke, at her house, they discuss the text and she sends a reply back asking ‘who is this?’, this is when we meet the Stalker; he is at home when he receives this reply and gets angry and frustrated because she doesn't know who he is, he has wanted her to recognise him for so long and he feels as if she ignores his existance. There is a wall shrine of her in his room. He then watches her location and follows her on 'Find My Friends' App, and leaves the room. We then go back to Kelly and Daniel talking about their friends being at the pub, they then leave to go to the pub.
On the way they have to walk through a park, The Stalker is also there following her location. As they walk through the park, they notice someone sitting on a bench (it is the Stalker), they take no notice as they dont realise they know who it is sitting across from the park. As they continue their walk through the park holding hands. The Stalker sees that they are holding hands and gets extremely angry and wants to do something about it now. The couple gaze back towards the original bench where they first saw the psycho sitting. It becomes apparent that the stalker is missing and not sat at the bench. They continue on their journey to the pub and as the walk round a corner the stalker walks behind them wearing a mask. Then from The Stalker's view he hits Luke over the head with a glass bottle, we hear the smash of the glass as the bottle comes into contact with Daniel's head. The screen goes blank and we hear Kelly screaming and panicking.
Steven appears doing day to day things as to the public he seems like a regular average person as he goes to the local shops. When he gets back from the shop he sits on the sofa, puts the radio on, smoking and drinking beer. On the radio there is a news announcement about the violent kidnapping as soon as he hears it he turns it off. A distant knocking comes from the upstairs of the house; he gets up and walks upstairs wearing the mask the stalker was wearing to hide his face he bangs the cupboard and shouts for her to be quite. It’s clear Kelly is trapped inside the cupboard. As he turns around there is the shrine, it reveals that Steven is the stalker. He then returns back downstairs to the room he was sat in and resumes his activity of watching tv and smoking. We hear Kelly starting to bang back on the cupboard shouting to be let out; the stalker walks back upstairs picks up a gun, walks up the to the cupboard and yanks the door open and reveals his face to her. She is shocked as she realises she knows him and questions why he’s doing this. He explains that he did this because he wants her and didn’t think Luke was good enough for her. Kelly explains that Steven is Luke's Friend and continually asks why he's doing this to her, Steven teells he to be quite and threatens with a gun then remains quiet and ignores her pleading. Kelly pleads with Steven to let her out to go to the toilet and so takes off the handcuffs. She takes this opportunity to run to the door but he grabs her, throws her to the floor and begins to choke her asking “Why did you do that, why did you try and escape!?”. His deperate state of love has drawn him to accidentally kill her, he then panics and doesnt know what he is going to do. He then puts the body in the boot of his car. He drives to a lake, opens the boot, stares at Kellys corpse for a while, contemplating what he has done. The carries her dead corpse and puts it beside the lake, rolls her over to dump the body in the lake. He then takes the gun from out of his pocket and holds it to his temple.